Tawnik

10/ 5 all the way.

Awesome, its been a pleasure to see your progress all these years !

Really, awesome.

Thanks for hte credit shoutout :D
Vapour.

Wow,

Your best movie yet, i really felt the emotion.
You portray the sadness in expressions very well Mesmay, I want to see mroe from you.

Keep this up, it can only get better.

Thansk for using my song in the credits,

10/5

Toonking :)

Whoa, Mes,

Uber imrpovement, I love it.

Sory though, but dont liek your choice of music but as its not your work then i'm not going to let it bring down your score, pure awesome otherwise.
10. 5.

Wow,

Major improvement over demo.

Loved the full flavour it gives here, its epic. Bass is better, as is the piano that really sort of annoyed me :) Its great.

Thanks for the pm.

10 / 5
Vapour.

Hmmm

8 for various reasons, epic melody & beat, BUT u need a better piano vsti me thinks. I can really help you on this, pm me if you need more info. Also, i cant really 10 a preview. Loved the fillers and uplifters and crahses etc etc etc, all very well done.

Needs a more solid bassline, which i could also help with, i have found loads of ways to make it more profound and stuff, while sounding good. It sounds nice at the start, but it sort of fades out with more instruments and etc. The lead is also a bit rough sounding, i think it should sound a bit smoother.

Cant think of much more.

Make it full length,
PM me,
Vapour.

Wow,

Awesome start, even though I prefer club - type intros.

I think that now, after proving that you have the talent to make things in such short time, you should dedicate yourself to making a more professional sounding, mastered, EQ'd dance song, in a longer time frame. Actually, just let it take as long as it takes, its good to be a perfectionist :P You should go for it big, and if you do this, you will most likely get yourself signed off advertising a little.

The repetitivity has already been adressed, but meh, its awesome

Dj Vapour.