Wow,
Major improvement over demo.
Loved the full flavour it gives here, its epic. Bass is better, as is the piano that really sort of annoyed me :) Its great.
Thanks for the pm.
10 / 5
Vapour.
Wow,
Major improvement over demo.
Loved the full flavour it gives here, its epic. Bass is better, as is the piano that really sort of annoyed me :) Its great.
Thanks for the pm.
10 / 5
Vapour.
Hmmm
8 for various reasons, epic melody & beat, BUT u need a better piano vsti me thinks. I can really help you on this, pm me if you need more info. Also, i cant really 10 a preview. Loved the fillers and uplifters and crahses etc etc etc, all very well done.
Needs a more solid bassline, which i could also help with, i have found loads of ways to make it more profound and stuff, while sounding good. It sounds nice at the start, but it sort of fades out with more instruments and etc. The lead is also a bit rough sounding, i think it should sound a bit smoother.
Cant think of much more.
Make it full length,
PM me,
Vapour.
Full length is finished, not submitted yet.
I used FL Keys at first because I didn't want alot of lag, which I get when I use Ravity. Thanks for offering to help but I think I can work on this by myself. The bass is alot louder in the full. The lead is rough sounding, I know. I like it like that.
Hahahaaaa.
DjTyph
Thanks for reviewing. You will get your PM when it is submitted
Wow,
Awesome start, even though I prefer club - type intros.
I think that now, after proving that you have the talent to make things in such short time, you should dedicate yourself to making a more professional sounding, mastered, EQ'd dance song, in a longer time frame. Actually, just let it take as long as it takes, its good to be a perfectionist :P You should go for it big, and if you do this, you will most likely get yourself signed off advertising a little.
The repetitivity has already been adressed, but meh, its awesome
Dj Vapour.
"...I think that now, after proving that you have the talent to make things in such short time, you should dedicate yourself to making a more professional sounding, mastered, EQ'd dance song, in a longer time frame..."
Listen to my other tracks ;).
I have tons of good quality ones =).
As for making it big i am trying.
Thanks for the review i appreciate it!
Nice, but
I think I heard clipping in various parts, especially the start. Keep on going ;)
ye i had lower bit rate because it wuldnt go up on newgrounds so lost out on quality :(
www.myspace.com/stolenz for the better version
cheers for review =)
OMG!
Awesome tune, so friggen catchy. Get yourself your own composition and get on label NOW!
WOW
10/10, 5/5. You've earned it
Thanks for your support and giving me your software/hardware information. I'll be sure to invest on some of the equipment used sometime. Thanks a bunch!
I'll fav you :P
Oh My...
You just earned my first 10, and you just owned my ears. That was really good, I loved it. I like the climax at about 2:50 but it does get rather loud. Lovely mixture of instruments too, they fit together really well, in this case. You have talent. Some nice SFX too such as storm/birds. I would be so greatful if you were to pm the vsti/vst/sf that you used in this piece so I can attempt amazing peices liek this.
Thanks in advance
M1CKEH
Pmed :). Glad you liked it.
Nice
Hey, Ill give it an 8.
Reasons?
For:
Well, I like the tune so thats good. The bass is also okay, but it could have more 'UMPH' it you know? A remix of this would be a good place to start for you, IMO.
Against:
The beat sucks I think. Compress that beat and then use bass boost. It usually works wel for me. You could choose either too, but make sure that it actaully uses the subwoofer I have here, which ATM it doesn't. Mabe it's harder for you if you don't have one.
It gets repetitive I think, and its the same sounding fi=ltered sound all of the way through. I'm giving you some slack because I like the melody though. Try to mix it up more, you'll get better results.
I tried to keep this balanced and as nice as I could. No harsh criticism meant, only consturctive intended. Thanks, keep making more.
I make moooosik, and i like it.
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